Ok look, this needs some proofreading but it's awesome. A socially awkward wizard attempts to grow himself a wife, things get out of control and he creates a giant magical seaweed island for the PCs to explore.
The island has 5 locations that are nicely varied and interesting. Three clones of the pirate captain that all think they're the real deal. Undead dwarves still working on their tunnel. An ancient sea giant, trapped in an eternal prison, looking to cut a deal. Stuff that will give the players something to do besides stab. A lot of dilemmas and interesting choices to make.
The random encounters are also good. A mutated fruit gremlin that it horrified at its own appearance. A group of pirates looking for their captain. The captain herself (or her clone?).
This thing has serious conceptual density. Tons of great ideas, interesting situations, volatile interactions. It also gives us some great hooks for potential adventures and shenanigans that can happen afterwords.
Hope to see some more from this author. Would also be great to see this polished up a bit and with some nice artwork.
Thank you for the positive remarks and the kind critiques. This is my first time writing anything like this and it is nice to have my first comment speak so encouragingly.
I'll seek some help proof reading the product and attempt to upload a corrected version.
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Fun little adventure. I would love to see a map as an additional download for GMs and for the table.
I image describing the infection when they get wounded it looks like cut open fruit with seeds inside.
Keep making more awesome.
Ok look, this needs some proofreading but it's awesome. A socially awkward wizard attempts to grow himself a wife, things get out of control and he creates a giant magical seaweed island for the PCs to explore.
The island has 5 locations that are nicely varied and interesting. Three clones of the pirate captain that all think they're the real deal. Undead dwarves still working on their tunnel. An ancient sea giant, trapped in an eternal prison, looking to cut a deal. Stuff that will give the players something to do besides stab. A lot of dilemmas and interesting choices to make.
The random encounters are also good. A mutated fruit gremlin that it horrified at its own appearance. A group of pirates looking for their captain. The captain herself (or her clone?).
This thing has serious conceptual density. Tons of great ideas, interesting situations, volatile interactions. It also gives us some great hooks for potential adventures and shenanigans that can happen afterwords.
Hope to see some more from this author. Would also be great to see this polished up a bit and with some nice artwork.
Thank you for the positive remarks and the kind critiques. This is my first time writing anything like this and it is nice to have my first comment speak so encouragingly.
I'll seek some help proof reading the product and attempt to upload a corrected version.
Again, thank you for your comment.